Faith Rochambeau is horrified to learn she was conceived during a rape. She’s determined to make her biological father, Victor Telemann, pay for his crimes. Using her computer skills to dig into his life, she searches for the powerful man’s Achilles Heel and a way to extract retribution. She’ll do whatever it takes to get a conviction, even it if means infiltrating his Fortune 500 company. She fails to plan on falling in love with her father’s smooth-talking stepson, Kent Telemann, who suspects she is a corporate spy. Faith is drawn to Kent, even though she’s not sure she can trust him. If her heart is wrong, he can put her life in danger. Meanwhile, her father is playing a lethal game he’s determined to win. Buy on Amazon My Review: I received this book from the publisher via NetGalley for an honest review. Where to start? Those who follow my reviews know I don't normally do romances, primarily because I feel they lack plots. But between the amazing cover and enticing blurb, I requested this book for early review. I had so much to say about this book, I'm going to break it down into segments so I don't forget anything. The First Pages: The book starts with Faith dealing with her mother's death, and consequently finding out about her origins after finding her mother's diary. The beginning is very emotionally charged, and I can see ow some would find Faith's next actions far-fetched. But as a survivor of rape, I understood the drive for justice and found myself rooting for Faith on her mission to avenge her mother. The Writing Style: Mix's writing style drew me in and kept me reading far into the night. I was worried about her name choice for Victor, hoping it didn't necessarily mean he would actually be the victor. Mix is also kind with her depictions of the rape itself. She puts enough detail to show that it was violent, but not so much as to trigger flashbacks for survivors. Faith as a Character: We meet Faith as a really smart wallflower, who's upbringing made her insecure and starved for love. She's obviously very emotionally driven despite her intellect. I found her character fun to read, enjoyed watching her develop more of a backbone, and kept reading to find out if she would get closure from her mother's injustices. Kent as a Character: We meet Kent when he's your typical cocky rich bachelor, partying often and the second majority share holder of a company not by work, but by being born. But his development was actually faster than Faith's, as we see his arrogance give way to insecurities of his own as he starts falling for Faith. The Romance: While not quite Insta-love, it felt forced. Particularly the first kiss. There had just been nothing showing that Faith was at that particular emotional point. Kent's emotional status didn't matter too much because at this point we know that he's faking the whole thing. After that one kiss though, all the other scenes were far more believeable. "So what should I do, Kristina?" If you like romances and lifetime movies, buy it for your shelves at home. If you like the action and espionage part of the story but don't like romance, buy a kindle version. If you just want to try reading something new and unique, read it at the library first.
The BLIND SCORPION is a Top Secret computer program for simulating nuclear weapons explosions and the catastrophic havoc they wreak. The most advanced technology of its kind, the BLIND SCORPION requires such intense number crunching capability that it runs on a dedicated mind-numbing 1,400 teraflop IBM Blue Gene supercomputer burrowed underground at the National Energy Research Computing Center in Oakland, California. Dr. Ross Shaheen, the developer of the software, is living the American dream. Between his internationally-recognized nuclear weapons research career at the prestigious Berkeley Lab and his picture-perfect family in the San Francisco suburbs, it's a good life that can only get better...until he is lured into lecturing before an elite group of scientists in the country of his birth: Iran. The seven thousand mile trip takes Shaheen back to the land of the lion and the sun, yet it also delivers to Iran's very doorstep an important American citizen with Top Secret security clearance. It soon becomes clear what the Iranians are really after: the BLIND SCORPION. The coveted software is the key to advancing their clandestine nuclear weapons program without the rest of the world being able to prove its existence. Shaheen becomes entangled in a twisted web of espionage, corruption and survival, putting to the test not only his secret knowledge but also the very core of his allegiance to the land he now calls home.
My Review:
I posted a review earlier after reading book one. After further reasearch, I found the original "Mushroom in the Sand" was all just one book, which made more sense to me. I had hopes that the last two parts of the trilogy would be miles better than the first. And they were...somewhat. I still liked the characters, it was a decent plot, frequent shoutouts to conspiracy theorists were entertaining. But was it "unputdownable"? No. Don't get me wrong. Reading this wasn't boring in the least. But I wasn't sucked into the world. I didn't at any point forget I was reading a book. I kept thinking about the other books I had that I wanted to read more than this one. I was hoping to get a solid four stars for this series, but my rating remains at a 3/5. Nice, but not great.
The BLIND SCORPION is a Top Secret computer program for simulating nuclear weapons explosions and the catastrophic havoc they wreak. The most advanced technology of its kind, the BLIND SCORPION requires such intense number crunching capability that it runs on a dedicated mind-numbing 1,400 teraflop IBM Blue Gene supercomputer burrowed underground at the National Energy Research Computing Center in Oakland, California. Dr. Ross Shaheen, the developer of the software, is living the American dream. Between his internationally-recognized nuclear weapons research career at the prestigious Berkeley Lab and his picture-perfect family in the San Francisco suburbs, it's a good life that can only get better...until he is lured into lecturing before an elite group of scientists in the country of his birth: Iran. The seven thousand mile trip takes Shaheen back to the land of the lion and the sun, yet it also delivers to Iran's very doorstep an important American citizen with Top Secret security clearance. It soon becomes clear what the Iranians are really after: the BLIND SCORPION. The coveted software is the key to advancing their clandestine nuclear weapons program without the rest of the world being able to prove its existence. Shaheen becomes entangled in a twisted web of espionage, corruption and survival, putting to the test not only his secret knowledge but also the very core of his allegiance to the land he now calls home.
My Review: Sometimes you'll read a book and realize that the author was intentionally making this the first book in a series. Little things clue you in--big blocks of information that may sometimes seem boring but turn out to be necessary later, a character introduced but not really worked with by the end of the book and most of all--the lack of a climax. There's no action in this one. It's all setting up for the next book. That's not to say it was unenjoyable; on the contrary, I really enjoyed the writing itself and Ferdowsi's prowess at the written word gave me large expectations for book 2. My Rating: 3 of 5, but keep an eye out for the series review once I see how everything in this book ties into the other ones.
Elisa Marie Hopkins is a debut author who released Diamond in the Rough this year. I fell in love with it, even though romance typically isn't my thing. you can follow her on Facebook, Instagram, Twitter or Pinterest. Can't wait for her next book? Elisa writes often on her website.
My Review:
I received this as part of a firstreads giveaway. While not exactly action packed, this intrigue-laden romance novel had and kept my attention. The beginnings of the romance in the story (young, single professional woman meets very rich, very handsome mysterious man while egged on by optimistic roommate) seemed awfully close to the first three pages of 50 Shades of Grey. Luckily, the violent men in the novel did not include Oliver Black in their numbers--and the relationship itself is well developed and interesting. All in all, Hopkins succeeded in creating a romance with well developed, relateable characters without focusing completely on the romance itself--no matter how in love you are, life is going to go on around you and both parties are going to have things going on. I look forward to more. My rating: 5 of 5.
The Interview:
Which authors or books have influenced your writing style? To be honest, no one in particular. I read often and I learn something from everybody. I also watch way too many movies and TV shows for my own good. I absorb and analyze the elements in stories that make me feel something or have interesting characters. If I happen to not like a story, then I begin to notice things like grammar, plot holes, bad dialogue, and I also learn this way. In any case, I never stop learning.
What inspired you to make ADitR more than ‘just another romance novel’?
I never want to be just another author. I like to read and write raw characters, typical and atypical outcasts, people whose morals and needs come into conflict. Sophie will never be light and fluffy. She wasn’t designed that way. You might think of her as whiny, she might piss you off, or you might laugh at her bad puns. The thing about Sophie though, whatever you think of her she probably won’t care (unless you’re Oliver Black, then she definitely cares). I inwardly cringe whenever I see or hear a reader say Oliver is too perfect. My faith on humanity drops ten points. I have no desire to write perfect characters because a) they’re boring to write about and b) no one in real life is perfect. If a good-looking face and a thick wallet is a woman’s definition of perfect, then something probably ain’t right. #prioritycheck No offense, Oliver. I love you. Bottom line is, I want to write books that will make your brain work. It’s an incredible organ. A busy brain is a clever brain! And a sexy one. I want to write books that can spark up a debate, sadden, inspire, delight. I don’t want to write flowery books that everybody will enjoy, because, let’s be real, you can’t please everyone. I personally hate some best sellers. Do I want to be liked? Uh, let me think. Of course! It’s the best feeling when readers have wonderful things to say about my stories.
What can we expect in your upcoming sequel to ADitR?
For snowboarders, the black diamond trial is of the most difficult slopes at a mountain. For readers, Black Diamond—I believe—I hope—will be a challenge for the mind. In a nutshell—nothing will be simple for Sophie and Oliver. For me, it was more of an intellectual exercise than the previous book. Research-wise, I felt like I was juggling frogs is all I can say. New characters are introduced to the game. Old favorites are upgraded. Others go a little nuts. It’s definitely more cohesive, just because the twists and turns of ADITR are pulled together in Black Diamond. I try to blend every possible emotion in a believable and satisfying mixture. You can read the blurb and add Black Diamond to your TBR on Goodreads. A cover reveal is coming up soon, as is a release date!
What can we look forward to in the future?
I was 23 when I wrote ADITR and, you know, as we journey through life, we tend to pick up some wisdom along the way. I was in a much different place in my life emotionally; now that I’m 27 and a tad bit more grown up, the stuff I write is too. That’s not to say I won’t be targeting a younger audience in the future. I have a YA story in the works. But shhhhhhh…
Are your characters based on real people?
Sometimes I meet people and am so strangely moved by them, that I want to explore them as characters within my stories. I see a lot of myself in Oliver. He really challenged me, and my IQ probably rose considerably just giving him an identity. We both know our way around engineering, and we’re both sometimes very analytical, a bit stubborn even, drawn to some of life’s most puzzling mysteries.
You recently wrote about a near death experience on your website. How do you feel about planes now? Does your mother still worry when you travel?
Oh em gee, thank you for reading! That flight changed my life. I can still remember the experience vividly. How do I feel about airplanes? Jean Kerr said it best: “I feel about airplanes the same way I feel about diets, that they are wonderful things for other people to go on.” Honestly, I have to pop a Dramamine every time I fly, but I love to travel so what’s a gal going to do other than grow a spine and face her fears? My mother has a doctoral degree in worrying – passed it with flying colors. I love you, Ma. I know, I know, I’ll understand when I have kids of my own.
Is there anything else you’d like to add?
ADITR was written because once upon a time, I was feeling very lost, hopeless, unhappy, and writing became an escape from my everyday life. Ultimately I wrote it for me. It might mean nothing to you, or you might like it. You might even want to come back for more. I’ve always been a dreamer, not much of a doer. So to actually have written a story, to have pulled myself up out of depression and into a better place, then gone on to have a book published, for me— it’s everything. If this book makes you feel something, I’m golden. Good. Bad. What’s the difference? If you see the good in the bad, then it’s not really bad, is it? Silver linings, people! They make the world go merry-go-round. I believe we itch for connection. We want to have a sense of belonging and identification. We want to feel like we’re not alone in this struggle. That said...if you do happen to take something valuable from this story, please write to me elisamariehopkins@gmail.com. Or if you just want to say hi, that’s cool too. I love to talk to readers/writers/authors/aspiring authors, and help in any way I can.
